No one knows your story better than you.

But a fresh set of eyes and a different point-of-view can help unlock your novel and take it from good to great.

As a book coach and developmental editor, I can help you keep your novel moving forward, brainstorm when you’re stuck, and shape your finished draft into a powerful story.

Here are some ways I can help:

Manuscript Analysis

When you’ve taken your book as far as you can on your own, it’s time to bring in fresh eyes and a trusted story analyst. Here’s where I come in. My Manuscript Analysis includes:

A full read and evaluation of your manuscript.
A 5-10 page editorial letter highlighting strengths of the manuscript and areas that need work, such as plot, character, world/setting, pacing, voice, and tension.
A 60-minute follow-up call to discuss the main areas of concentration for your next round of revisions and to answer any questions.

Rates from: $3.50/page

Developmental Editing

When you’re ready to take your book to the next level, you need a more detailed analysis of the work and guidance toward your next revision. As your Developmental Editor, I offer:

A full read and evaluation of your manuscript.
A 5-10 page editorial letter highlighting strengths of the manuscript and areas that need work, such as plot, character, world/setting, pacing, voice, and tension.
A second read with in-line suggestions to help with your revision.
Chapter-by-chapter notes to guide your next draft.
A 60-minute follow-up call to discuss the main areas of concentration for your next round of revisions and to answer any questions.

Rates from: $6/page

Email me to schedule your Manuscript Evaluation or Developmental Edit now

Book Coaching

Writing is deep, emotional work. It can also be lonely work. Sometimes you need a partner to help you through the rough spots. As your book coach, I can help you complete that first draft or guide you through heavy revisions. I will:

Begin with a kick-off meeting via video or phone to learn about your goals and vision for your book, discuss areas where you may need extra help, and decide on a production schedule that works for you.
Keep you accountable to your writing schedule to keep your project moving forward.
Provide feedback on your work to make sure your story stays on track.
Offer support, encouragement, and ideas when your writing hits a rough patch.
Celebrate your progress and, of course, completion.

A typical schedule includes written feedback via email on up to 50 pages per month, submitted weekly or bi-weekly to suit your writing pace. In addition, I will be available for two one-hour video or phone meetings each month, as needed.

Rates from: $400/month*

*Three month minimum commitment.

“Get Unstuck” Creative Boost

Maybe you’ve hit the saggy middle of your story or you can’t figure out your ending. Perhaps a secondary character has taken over and you’re no longer sure whose story you’re telling. Maybe you have a glut of brilliant ideas and can’t decide which one to work on first. A “Get Unstuck” Creative Boost will get you back on track. You’ll get:

A 60-minute “Get Unstuck” video meeting or phone session to help you uncover your story problems and figure out what’s holding you back.
A writing assignment to help you find the answers.
A 60-minute follow-up session to fine-tune the details and get you back on track.

Rates from: $250

Email me to schedule your Book Coaching Kick-off or Get Unstuck session now

The Perfect Query Package

Congratulations! Your book is finished and you’re ready to submit to agents or editors. You get one chance to catch someone’s attention, so let’s get it right. With a Perfect Query Package, you’ll get:

Evaluation of your query letter, synopsis, and opening chapter, and suggestions to shape a solid submission package.
In-depth edits on your next round to strengthen you query package and take it to the next level.
A final polish of your query, synopsis, and opening chapter package so that it’s ready to meet agents and editors who will love it.

Rates from: $500

Email me to schedule your Perfect Query Package now

Why Work with Me?

I am a working writer who is published in both fiction and nonfiction. I understand what it takes to get to the end of a first draft, never mind the seemingly endless hours of revision. I understand how doubt, fear, and frustration can derail a project, and that life, family, and work can demand your creative energy. I also know that, if you want to see your book in the hands of readers, you have to commit. And sometimes you have to ask for help.

What I Don’t Offer:

If you’re looking for line edits, copy edits, or a proofread, I am not the editor for you. I can however refer you to many qualified professionals to help you with that work.